the brutal slaying of my soul

[undead]

sorry for the shortness:

the only thing that i have left to remind me of who i am
are the remnants of the faded heart that you drew on my hand
a smile would have caught my attention in a heart beat
but somehow i must have missed it because now the razor grazes flesh
this grinning unforgiveness, it seems to make my bones shake like the guilt i must endure.

it seems so wrong.

 

[cherub]

maybe be short but definately a great piece

 

[neurotoxic]

Shiva likes.

 

[Tanuki_23]

I dont think its too short at all, rather it packs a punch.