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the beer bottles...

wesmdow

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...so many bottles
lining the desk.
and they wont leave-

i sniffle and i hustle
to throw away--
to clean/up

but, that just means more--
more bottles, more.

yay!

bottles.
 
Haha, I like it!

...so many bottles
lining the desk.
and they wont leave-

There's something strange about these lines, in a good way: the idea that the bottles won't leave. It's a great way to open (the poem, the mind, possibilities).
 
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