the amyl's burn

[Raz]

HMMZ, annoying....the bit in italics towards the end I initially did as one long uninterrupted line, which I think works a lot better, but the formatting automatically puts a space in the middle of the line which breaks it up artificially....oh yeah, and this is your obligatory OMG gay sex pr0n poem warning also..


right under your nose
acrid sex
elastic time
softer lips
harder dicks
tongues more wet
poundingpoundingpounding
inside your skulls
hot breath
your breath
his breath
both
forget everything else
forget you're a person
just be meat
a thrust
a surge
an urge
a deeper throat
a compliant hole
and at the end
mountainshakingorgasmcumexplosion
starsandblackoutedgingcloser
nomoreairnomoreoxygen
and the scab
the mark
the itch that reminds you

the amyl's burn.

 

[Slay]

this is definitely one of the most kickass poem i ever read here amyl&butyl ftw!!!!!!!!!

 

[up all night]

forget you're a person
just be meat
a thrust
a surge

You're one of the best on BL at understanding (and writing) the raw.

 

[2oclockbeanfiend.2]

well that created a hell of a visual...i'm just gonna say i'm neutral on whether or not i liked what i saw or not, but mission accomplished indeed...especially the italicized parts