the amazement of her

[Negative]

I'm amazed at how much I love you.
I love it when you make me like this
I want to hold you
I want to hold you tightly, all night.
I want you . . . more than anything I've ever wanted before
I want to fly to you . . . I want to take you . . . right there in the airport . . . I want to rip your sarong off and love you for hours . . . I want to take you to a library and pull out nine or ten books and talk about them with you . . .
I want to pick your brain clean . . . I want to know every emotional nook and cranny of your heart . . . I want to know everything you've ever forgotten
. . . I want to be able to write a song that makes you forget who you are . . .
I want to inspire you to make the world a better place
I want you to wish you'd never met anyone before me cause no one after would ever do
I want to feel like your inside my soul and outside my clothes . . . I want to be the one that makes you remember why you love lifeso much . . .
I want you to be like a child new to the world . . . amazed by every stare, awed by every touch . . . engulfed by every sense . . .
I want you to know that I am the answer to every query you ever had . . .
I want you to understand that all that I need is your love . . .

 

[iLoveYouWithaKnife]

she's a lucky gal, if she could ever understand.

 

[Dastrix Slogan]

love just pours through in this - awesome awesome work.

 

[Mariposa]

I want you to wish you'd never met anyone before me cause no one after would ever do

Wow, Thaddeus, that's really amazing.

Great work, sweetie.

 

[RareForm]

loved it.

 

[Negative]

Its amazing how much better people understand my ramblings and how much more my emotions come through when I actually feel it . . . thanks guys . . .

 

[wanderer21]

I want to be the one that makes you remember why you love lifeso much . . .

ahhhhhh--I love those lines.

I wish I had a guy saying this about me

 

[mariacallas]

^^^pfft...ill say it to you

Thad...i love you soo much

 

[mariacallas]

u

 

[axl blaze]

Thad is still with her. in fact, he's closer to her than he's ever been in his entire life and ever would have been.

 

[lil angel15]

This is one of the most touching and beautiful pieces of writing I've ever read.
I'm sure that almost everyone can relate to this on some level, I know I do.....

Lil

 

[Samadhi]

This makes my heart ache for Patricia and Thad and i don't even know them.

 

[(Wordy)]

Likewise.

This part really touches me:

I want to know everything you've ever forgotten
. . . I want to be able to write a song that makes you forget who you are . . .

 

[up all night]

^ That was the bit I was going to quote.

This was amazing. When someone leaves the words they write for others they leave the most important part of their mind.

My thoughts have been and will continue to be with you CC.

 

[RareForm]

^agreed. this definitely carries a new essence.

 

[Samadhi]

This was amazing. When someone leaves the words they write for others they leave the most important part of their mind.
.

You have such an effortlessly beautiful way with words, Yarni.

This still makes my heart ache. Such a tragedy.

 

[e5th3r]

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