Tell me lies.....

[crshnbrn200]

Talk to me of mundane things.
Take my mind away.
I don't want to be
trapped int this skin any longer.
Tear it away it has grown
much too tight
much too thin.

Speak to me of pleasant lies
I can no longer feel
the warmth of the sun
or anything that is real.

Tell me of sweet dreams
for I am waking in
nightmares.
Visions of my own fallacies
fears
and realities.

 

[Dastrix Slogan]

From your last piece and this one I think that you are much in the same place as I was not so long back. I enjoyed this and I look forward to seeing what comes forward from all this. Keep writing!

 

[cherub]

definately feel you in this,, it is strong yet, the sense of fear, and confusion,, great piece. definately one i will be reading again .

 

[crshnbrn200]

Thanks all and have no fear, I will keep writing as the mood strikes....