Tears Rotted

[-|Twiztd|-]

Each teardrop shed
flushed in the moments of pain suffered

I feel within the emptiness
driven in again to my internal domain

Softly spoken sorrows forever
reign in these halls, calling to deaf ears

Whilst sending mental images
to the blind and invisible beings by

Caged in webs constructed with
pure hatred and lined in the freshest lies



Absorbed by the agony trapped
inside as its slow decaying begins again

Once before her organs had
rotted yet not a soul had bothered to save her

Therefore she died inside
only crying for safety, no longer speaking truths

Filling existence with everything
futile for she has given up on all worthwhile causes

Fading away while lacking the will
to stay in moments of pain suffered and teardrops shed

 

[Altered_Soul9]

I great piece of writing. Very Nice

 

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[skjalff]

I liked this heaps!! definitely emotional, it felt like rage at the world with a hint of individual conviction... l Will definitely come back to this one for i'm not sure if my original impression was accurate. I like the wording and the feeling. Good work!



skjalff

 

[LostProphecy]

Softly spoken sorrows forever
reign in these halls, calling to deaf ears

Pure fucking genious. Many snaps on this one.

JB