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The Forsaken

Bluelighter
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I hope that the sun falls into the ocean.
We will swim in the warmth and our hearts will beat in ecstacy.
Will I be found in a place without chemicals.
You know the bent reality that we love creating.
Will that moment be made in a moment of complete clarity.
I sometimes feel like a wall has fallen on my lower bady.
Severing my spine in two and now I can't swim in this sea love.
My hands are turning purple and my heart beats slower.
[This message has been edited by smileEs (edited 18 August 2001).]
 
your opening line kicked ass! your imagery is very nice.
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"...there are 2 paths, you can go back, but in the long run... there's still time to change the road you're on..."
 
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