sweet liquid love

[vurtomatic]

I

swirl a little
swirl and climb
a little storming dark
it climbs

coat a little
coat and paint
a world of red
translucent tint
it drips

drip a coat
of bloody red
smeared walls
of rose dark
love


II

it comes in the air
inviting scent of red
calling calling sweet
seduction of storming
love

little drops of red
afloat and buoyant
in the air they travelled
sweet anticipation


III

unseeing taste upon
plump red tongue

a touch a taste a tease
sweet sweet love

red deluge floods

a cavern of senses
touched

it rolls it fills it expands
a crescendo of unending
sweet red love

love me tender
(sweet massage of senses)
love me cruel
(a little bite goes a long way)


IV

down down down
into the dark of red
is all i see
a dark red sea

of sweet

liquid

love

 

[neverwas]

love me tender
(sweet massage of senses)
love me cruel
(a little bite goes a long way)

i like the way this peice differs in style from ur others angel. the style is very well written and i especially liked these lines. nice work as always.

*stars*

 

[Seedlesss]

Reminds me of the moments of suspended time before I push the plunger and empty the barrel...

 

[on the road]

omg i loved this...

perfect

I'm keeping it

thank u