Surrounded by nothing

[Traumatizd4life]

Have you ever been alone
in a crowded room
when a thousand voices surround you
but none call out your name
the flashing of reality
burns a picture on your brain
Blurry images of gradeur
a fuzzy spot in life
no purpose but the one you make
no direction but the one you take
All by myself on a cluttered street
surrounded by people i will never meet
living in a place noone knows
feeling all alone

 

[plazma]

boy do i know that feeling!
good work!

-plaz out-
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[ C E N S O R E D ]

 

[Nietzche]

I think you have isolated the secret to everything:

no purpose but the one you make
no direction but the one you take

Bravo tramatizd!!! I was terribly impressed by this piece.

 

[5FACES]

WOW! YOU TOOK ONE THOUGHT AND EXPLAINED IT PERFECTLY. I FEEL LIKE THAT ALL TOO OFTEN!
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before love there are
memories of innonence.
after there are none...

 

[Traumatizd4life]

Wow...im like 3 seconds from jumping around the room all happy....Thanks guys!

 

[amber ::]

i can relate so closely to that :/

 

[nans]

and have you ever felt silent where everyone sings and talks? and have you ever been peaceful while the sky falls down?
you really put it nice, i know what you feel too.