Sunrise

[froggygirl]

The crisp fall breeze
nipping softly at my body,
Surrounded by rainbow flowers
happily awaiting the sunrise.
Mountains framing the soft sky
Chilled by the dawns' early kisses.
Seeming as though time completely froze,
I anxiously watch the horizon, the sun,
Slowly coming out of it's hiding,
Revealing the vivid colors of the
Fresh green pine trees and
the tall waving grass.
The beautiful moment I had been longing for
Finally was in front of my eyes
Stealing my breath
and refreshing my mind.
This mystical moment
Will forever be mine.

 

[Naughtiest_Maximus]

I really love the imagery i get while reading this. l can almost feel the breeze, it put's me in mind of being in the Scottish Highlands. A beautiful piece keep it up.

 

[ArmyDansGirl]

Chilled by the dawns' early kisses.
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What a pretty line this made me feel calm. I like it