Sunny Day

[BrokedownPalace]

Well, today for once had a pretty good day and was in quite a good mood, and since i have rather regrettably been slacking on my writing, i decided to sit down and write this. Just a rough draft so far.

Time taken: Five minutes, some percocet and some klonopin.

More optimistic than my usual style, just felt like sharing.

I look at my wristwatch
and i see i'm trapped in time
moving forwards or maybe backwards
the face is too foggy to see.
I'd explain my fears
to someone, anyone
though the faint stains of teardrops
may give it away
in case it seemed unclear.
You and i can climb the hills
step by step ascend the rocky stairs
leading to the summit
high above the trees
high above the cities
the pressure of day to to day
no longer a threat
no need to live up to expectations
we'd be high above the clouds
where the rain can't reach us
and put a damper on my sunny day.

 

[New]

I like the message of hope that it gives...something not present in my own writing...thank you for that.

 

[BrokedownPalace]

Thanks Glad i could bring some light to someone else's day. My writing is typically on the sadder side, but i got a burst of positive energy for once. My girlfrend also noticed the change in writing style. I don't mind, i hope it's here to stay.

Good day everyone

 

[Jabberwocky]

i enjoyed the metaphor about being trapped by time. I think this is one of the core aspects of the human condition. I am happy that for a time you were able to ascend to a place that time or mood could not make you bow to your will. I cant wait to read more from you.