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satori18

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i wrap my thoughts around you
i think about what this could possibly be
i stretch it and manipulate...further that is repairable, fully
concious of the impending pseudo-definition of failure
but you have no idea what i thought was coming
and i have no idea that you understand not one bit of what i put out there
miscommunication being the key to the cold allowing me to endlessly perpetuate my metaphor...
peace is goodness, goodness is warmth,
and so i find in inevitable, that i do not move my life, but in this region, winter strikes
and if there is perhaps the correct mixture of external stimuli that i internally reject as being inherent
the months of the season dissappear
and i am still cold
and if perhaps the presently human embodiment of which i always call "you" exists in my space
an acts according to self-fullfilling prophecy
winter is twelve months long but i am too engrossed in domesticating my own self-pity that i do not notice
and if, suddenly, all that i preach is found to be true, and the ringing like a moral tuning fork inside me ceases to produce a note that sings with the residual worry of hypocracy...i will bask in your eternal springtime...
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***"without deviation from the norm, progress is not possible"f.zappa***
BE AN AGENT OF CHANGE
"one good thing about music, when it hits, you feel no pain"-marley
"there is a party in my mind, and i hope it never stops, there is a party up there allt he time, we are gonna party till we drop"d.byrne
***satori shalom***
 
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vunduval.
JJ
 
wow
your words feel like liquid to me
just amazing
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if you found out you were dreaming, would you want to wake up?
 
thanks guys...
and THANK YOU jj....really, i didn't do a good job at ur reply, or ur message, but really, thank you
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***"without deviation from the norm, progress is not possible"f.zappa***
BE AN AGENT OF CHANGE
"one good thing about music, when it hits, you feel no pain"-marley
"there is a party in my mind, and i hope it never stops, there is a party up there allt he time, we are gonna party till we drop"d.byrne
***satori shalom***
[This message has been edited by satori18 (edited 20 February 2001).]
 
Nice words. Thanks for posting. It has all left me with something to ponder.
 
funny. i forget to inhale. (oxygen, not weed, sillies!)
excellent though. as noodle said, it leaves me with something to ponder.
bc
 
dood! shit, this is gonna stay with me for a while... i guess this means i gotta turn my brain on now? ahhh damnit! hee hee... but its worth it
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good work girl
Mellabopper
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animals are for petting!
"does anyone know where we are? because i think i dont have a clue"
"damn the man, save the empire!" - empire records
Corruption is key.
 
thanks mella...i tmeans alot because i really respect your writing....
i had to give this one a teenie boost cuz i am not ready to have it dissapear into the depths of the second page yet....
peace
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***"without deviation from the norm, progress is not possible"f.zappa***
BE AN AGENT OF CHANGE
"one good thing about music, when it hits, you feel no pain"-marley
"there is a party in my mind, and i hope it never stops, there is a party up there allt he time, we are gonna party till we drop"d.byrne
***satori shalom***
 
Wow...*bump*.....I'm left in awe of your work and how you write...I'm speechless...I'm sure I'll read this over again and again...
Dymnd
 
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