Sultry Woman

[PhorIndicator]

Woman Laden Golden Hair
From blue eyes spring a sultry stare
She looks she hesitates, then flutters
Soft Wisdom beneath watchful shutters
A sigh then giggle, oddly charming
Oblivious to how disarming
A glance and smile, her heart could tell
Rich mysteries stored behind its veil
A momentary lapse of thought
And here I stare again, I’m caught
Eyes rejoined
A Summer’s Gaze, Our Flat Horizon
Suddenly
There’s just nothing else to lay my eyes on

 

[TiberCross]

this is absolutely beautiful.

 

[RareForm]

this was fun to read...i liked it much..

 

[cherub]

Elegent comes to mind when i read this,,,,,,

definately smooooooth!!!!

 

[onetwothreefour]

lovely

very good description of the odd charms we all hope to find in another.

 

[mariacallas]

A sigh then giggle, oddly charming
Oblivious to how disarming...
A glance and smile, her heart could tell
Rich mysteries stored behind its veil.

i absolutely love these lines!! Very very nice work :D

 

[Dastrix Slogan]

Very well written, I agree with allt he above - smooth - but fun!