suicide note

[undead]

suicide note

dont wipe away my tears
i dont need your help
cause ive been fighting all these years
just to find myself in hell

these days have gotten worse
from the start until the end
and even though sometimes it hurts
ive found but few true friends

loneliness in times of pain
frustration for the mind
searching my heart to keep me sane
but theres nothing left to find

they point and laugh as if to say
that im not wanted here
so i collect my thoughts of intent to stay
and walk out on my fears

back to this bitter sorrow
in dark solitude i lay
there will be no tomorrow
to take my pain away

now these tears, i pass to you
what more is there to say
but remember when youre feeling blue
i loved you everyday

 

[onetwothreefour]

assuming this isn't a *real* suicide note (i don't think so - you've seemed like a pretty level-headed kinda dude from what i've seen of you, and also pretty ambitious and talented, so don't be going there)...i quite like this.

most depressing poetry is actually pretty laughable, so to be able to pull it off like this is definitely a talent. "there will be tomorrow to take my pain away" - i like it

 

[onetwothreefour]

/me thinks some more.

hmm, even if this isn't *real* as such, i guess it probably still came from a kinda depressing place...if you wanna chat or anything, pm me or come into #bluelight sometime...

 

[.dR spgeddi]

thats very nice of you 1234.
i liked it too.
hope you are well ryanlaughlin.

 

[Raz]

ummm...kind of feels awkward commenting on this, but yeah it is actually quite well written, very emotive...hope everything's okay dude.

 

[frostyangel]

*tear.. no inflicting pain on yourself.. we love you here!!! Stay .. Stay!

 

[SnowFrog]

Very Nice writting!!!

There is only one thing that makes being at this state a good one....U can only get better from here...

Keep ur head up

*Hugs*

~B