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Stream of Half Consciousness

ice-9

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if you really work hard, you can succeed.
if you put your mind to it, things will happen.
create your own luck.
“aim for the stars” they say
“even if you miss, the moon is there to catch you”
(what the fuck does that mean?)
love others, and it shall be reciprocated
fling your heart upon the chopping block
because even if it gets divided
seventy times thirty
what you learned from it was worth it.
Trust in yourself, and others will follow.
Or so they say,
Or so I have heard...
And then I grew up.
Hell, the only guarantee in life is that
there are no guarantees whatsoever.
(except maybe for death and human stupidity)
life is like a box of chocolates?
It’s also like a river:
It will go where it wants, regardless of what you do.
sure, you can paddle here or there,
pretend that you have control over your direction
if it makes you feel better,
But you really need to keep your head afloat first.
Then maybe you can help those beside you
who are drowning.
oh yeah, and watch out for the school of piranha,
or the solitary weed that threatens to ensnare you to its level
after all,
Solamen miseris socios habuisse doloris
(misery loves company)
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the latin kinda shoved its way in there...i was reading Marlowe's Faust.
 
i love this piece, excellent job
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You gotta be a bad girl in this world to be heard...
 
I am constantly amazed when I get a glimpse inside your mind.
Beautiful work Ice.
 
cliche' meets insecurity in this blockbuster concerning the human condition...and the beauty is the message...remember your floaties, but stear clear of the Amazon.
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Make sure you gum his licence on his forehead before you bundle him into the cab.
 
hmiller: i love having cliche' work for me in conveying a different message.
thank you all for your responses...i've had a long bit of writer's block.
(btw, did any one notice the pun on the title? and yes, i'm a geek.)
[This message has been edited by ice-9 (edited 09 September 2001).]
 
Awesome words, iceeie..
you can paddle here or there,
pretend that you have control over your direction
if it makes you feel better
I find myself in this situation more than I care to admit..
**wondering why you don't post more**
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It’s also like a river:
It will go where it wants, regardless of what you do.
... i'm finding that out the hard way.
thanks for posting this. you are a brilliant writer.
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E-girl
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"There's a part of me, that i forgot to be. Take a look and see, the light still shines in me." ~~ Milk, Inc.
 
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