Stream of Conscience - Ecstacy Poem

[raver_goddess777]

i open my mouth,
and i close my eyes,
i can feel the bass climb up my thighs.
shivers shoot up and down my spine,
as words take shape in my mind.
feel the mentol flow through out these lungs,
i'm nibbling your neck can you feel my tounge?
words spout out my mouth in a strange rhyme,
it's as if the world stood still and all of time.
i want you near me, hold my hand,
don't let me go can you understand?
as eyes roll back in my head,
if i had anymore in me... i'd be dead.
out here on the dance floor... i'm faced,
i'm not all here at all, i'm in outer space...
lights and trails fill the room,
so much to see as the dance floor booms.
beads of sweat fly off my body,
some one touch me, just anybody.
can you feel the e flow through out,
i told you everything would be fine with out a doubt.
come sit right next to me, and let me touch your skin,
i'm not going to hurt you, so let me in...
let the x take hold,
so you don't need to judge or be told...
just drop the pill...
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"Keep the good times rolling"
[This message has been edited by raver_goddess777 (edited 29 July 2000).]

 

[k2436]

This is the juiciest piece of writing i have had the pleasure to read in quiet some time.

 

[MDMA desciple]

wow... i realy liked this one. sorry i dont anything more critical or analytical to say. i just liked it. hehe
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"The spirit-world doth open lie,
thy sense is shut; thy heart is dead.
Up, scholar, lave with courage-high
thine earthly breast in the morning red!" -Goethe

 

[LiQwidVibeZ]

I like i like =) Do you have any others? I like your style
peace
Jessica
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In a world of insanity only the mad are sane.