strategems' snare

[StatuS tickleS]

what are the words to write
to read, to say or think
to fake you
to make you believe
the things you hear
things i whisper in your ear
things taht figuratively drip from my rear
throughout what pretext
can i falsely interest your intellect
to intersect and dissimilate
maybe i'll evoke faux emotions and make your heart defibrillate
maybe i'll invoke smoke, blood, sweat and tears
by design my lies are disguised
and dancing around your ears

 

[knight_marshall]

Maybe I don't get it, but I feel sad for you. If I do get it, you've written it quite well... sounds like it should rapped, and then some chick should start singing the chorus, almost like the Dido/Eminem song Stan.