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SpindleFlesh

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So I had a really amazing night tonight...I was hanging with one of my friends and this girl I'd hung out with slightly before...there were some drugs involved, but basically we had a 4-hour conversation that covered a broad spectrum of topics, but it mostly centered around very deep issues. Then, my friend left and it was just this girl and I. I'm not "technically involved" with anyone at the moment, but I'm not on the market if you can follow that (looooong story). Anyways, I now feel strongly for this girl, she's the first that I've been interested in mentally as well as physically in a long time...but it has to remain platonic, so all we did was talk for another 4 hours or so, though there were some connotations. Anyways, I wrote this rhyme to try and express how I feel about her and the situation...she's never really dated anyone seriously (we're both 22) and I think we would complement each other well, but that can't happen...it's still got me kind of dazed but in an odd state of euphoria. Anyways, enough rambling, here's the poem:
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Conversation with you was like a bond with a star
beautiful and bright - a true delight- to really know who you are
shining on your own, admired from afar,
from those intimidated by a woman with a strong will and heart.

I'm here to remind you to remind yourself
that deep down you have been blessed with a great deal of wealth
an intriguing mind, a caring soul,
the kind of girl, it seems, whose company could never get old.

You might say it's the drugs; I might disagree,
but they're a gateway to your inner personality,
a light that might be too shy to breach the clouds,
but whose luminosity of which you should be very proud.

Tonight the clouds dispersed and the sky was clear,
we felt like we could just talk like we hadn't in years,
your face so radiant as you spoke your piece,
a twinkle from a star I truly hope shall never dim nor cease.
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I sent this to her...did I go too far?
 
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No you defiantly didn't "go too far", those rhymes were a really awesome compliment to her and she'd be crazy not to see that and acknowledge it.
 
***waaaahhh***

when will someone write me love notes?

...thats beautiful. the connection two people can have, even after only talking for a bit, can change the way you look at life completely...
 
As a follow-up to this post, I talked to her today and I definitely didn't go too far :D She told me that she cried for a half-hour when she read it and that no one had ever said anything like that to her before. The connection is a beautiful but bittersweet blessing...I'm just happy that I was able to make an impact on her life, and that we'll definitely always remain friends....

And faithfully dangerous, if you look past the fact that I don't know you at all I'll write you some love poems too ;)
 
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