Storm

[allthewayin]

A beautiful ship, set your sails
Ignore the rocks and broken nails
In your passage, a lot of places
Transparent names, with blurry faces

Crash into shore, stay for awhile
Something here temps your smile
We can sail on a new ship
A vessel with rails, harder to grip

Stormy sea, calling your name
Intimate swells leave you the same
The rush of the ride, I understand
I want it to, yet hand in hand

Misplaced anchor left untouched
I will help you scrape the rust
Bare your skin under the moon
Come sunrise, we'll be there soon

 

[lostNfound]

It's a little rough but I really like it.

 

[manic_panic]

psh..read it twice--it's strong, I'll give ya that...it's a solid poem for sure, my friend. aloha

 

[allthewayin]

Thanks, I consider it one of my better ones... It was written for someone I cared a lot for.

 

[empty_remains]

i didn't find it rough, very strong and very good. thanks for sharing it. i've found that i'm liking the poetry more on here than i am on my site i've been with for years.