Stay Gone

[PinkStrawberries]

Have you
has anybody
gone
has anybody
have you
has anybody
gone
have you?

Stay
will anybody
does anyone
stay
will anybody
does anyone
stay
would you?

 

[DamagedLemon]

Very simple but I like it. I sense abandonment and confusion in those simple words.

 

[artndrugsplz]

i would stay then leave then come back again
unless you want to come with

 

[PinkStrawberries]

Thanks, sweet words for my first time sharing. Maybe I'll post more soon.

 

[manic_panic]

I dig it. keep writing

 

[Mehm]

the first part especially is very repetitive. I know this is on purpose, but it confuses me as i don't understand the message (probably because I can be slow at "getting" poetry).

This seems like a very contradictory peace, could you please explain it further?

thanks for posting, I hope to see you around more often