standing there...

[*queensmack*]

i stand in the shadows,
all by myself.
not knowing who cares for me.
how i long to be myself.
i struggled every day,
to find a reason why.
i search for 'love'
but it continued to hide.
friends are some comfort.
but only so much i can stand.
i walked blindly.
with no one to hold my hand.
then he comes along,
and my life has more purpose.
he brightens the shadows
protects from those that hurt me.
i cherish the love,
that we now share.
i want you to know
how much i really care.
*hugs to Plazma*
*queensmack*
[ 15 December 2001: Message edited by: *queensmack* ]

 

[The Good Me]

Just a little tip, and please take this as constructive criticism, try not to rhyme a word with itself. Keep writing.

 

[plazma]

-plaz out-

 

[*queensmack*]

not a professional writer...i dont mind.

 

[C Divinity]

i thought it was so so sooooo sweet

 

[*queensmack*]

Plaz told you liked it hunni. thanx heaps.
*snuggles and kisses for Plaz*
*queensmack*