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Spent Shaman

jaymie

jaymie

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No vision?
spent your shaman?
Neptune's meditation
feeds his soul off your own life's hesitation.

Every inch is a mile in your mind.
I am on overdrive;
so hard to feel which door is real this time.

Swept from under my feet the once satisfying warmth of false convictions.
This day is to me one more day in which one act has set my life free; provided me clarity in this deeply confusing reality.

Blissfully blinding, deep binary movements within my soul keep me focused, without fear in this moment.
Numb feet?
What do you want from me?

Fly away from me, little big one.
Fly and find your new Shaman.
Another's nest.
Another's breast to rest your head on.

Please dream change.
Reinsert my chip,
so I can be free.

Knowing or not what is absolute I get up and run with the world in my hands, feet pounding away at solid ground like thunder claps through sky.
 
jaymie said:
Fly away from me, little big one.
Fly and find your new Shaman.
Another's nest.
Another's breast to rest your head on.

Please dream change.
Reinsert my chip,
so I can be free.
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The whole thing was great -- but i really liked these parts, they struck me as unique in this piece..

I feel this was written full of confusion..

~Drew
 
yeh, lots of confusion, but it was refreshing to write. not so much about clarity as getting out word combinations. the subject itself is very muddy. much to do with a lost love.

thanx tho :)
 
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This is great. Loved how you wrapped this around the word "shaman". I loved it!!!

the line:

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Knowing or not what is absolute I get up and run with the world in my hands, feet pounding away at solid ground like thunder claps through sky.
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I swear this line goes on my bluelight signature!!!

thanks!



skjalff
 
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