Son of Nothing

[TiberCross]

i purposely forgot who you were
your imprint faded long ago
the words you never spoke, i never had to hear.
the things you never taught, i never had to learn.
the love you never gave, and never could.

estranged in your containment
deranged by your inane-ment
compare my heart to the family picture frame bent
you're insane and i'm not the same kid.

 

[RareForm]

i understand this too well....

 

[3rd Realm]

Good. This is confusing as well as good.

 

[neverwas]

*hugs*

 

[cherub]

Sometimes being different is better then following the same path,,,,,, for that I give you props and the knowledge to know what is right in your heart.

TC- always love your writting,, if i am slow sometimes to posting to it.

 

[Altered_Soul9]

Very Nice. This brought a tear to my eye.

 

[Riot Grrrl]

Wow, that's heavy.
Beautiful piece of writing TiberCross. Theres alot more meaning behind those words

 

[froggygirl]

i purposely forgot who you were
your imprint faded long ago
the words you never spoke, i never had to hear.
the things you never taught, i never had to learn.
the love you never gave, and never could.

I loved that...

 

[DG]

These words can apply to so many various important people I have "had" in my life.

 

[CHiLD-0F-THE-BEAT]

Originally posted by TiberCross
estranged in your containment
deranged by your inane-ment
compare my heart to the family picture frame bent
you're insane and i'm not the same kid.

^This was biting and so smooth in its transition.
A really great framed work. Well done.

 

[IXinX]

"Compare my heart to the family picture frame bent"

NOW DATS WHAT IM TALKING BOUT!

messing about with grammar and the structure of sentences makes me horny

 

[human paraquat]

^^what

 

[Dastrix Slogan]

Sorry I missed this the first time (was on hols), takes much to have the strength to write something like this. Much respect.