Somewhere

[Frosty da snowman]

Walking through the scared sacred forests of hello
Madman whispers of poetic license, strange verbal rites, and bastard curses in your ear
This dream screams of fear
This is a phobic need for normalcy

Sipping wine and thinking of streetlights
The blank confessions of taxi drivers ringing like a sound track
A collage of bums painted across your eyeballs
And an incipient need for speed
These are your last thoughts before head hits pillow

Surfing solar flares on the rusted shell of a Winnebago
The roar of the magnetic tide pulsing with your heart beat
Red, yellow rush
A midnight wet dream across Mercury’s charred face
This is dissatisfaction

Smoking 3:am, sitting in gasoline, and wrapped in bitter wet blankets with your cock in hand
Dreaming of her
Smiling
Dancing
Smirking
Waiting
This is obsession

Jacked into 8:30’s pulse
Surround by cubes, co-workers, devils, and slave drivers
This is a dealer’s twisted joke
A needle full of reality
The saccharin hell of a placebo
This should be every child’s worse nightmare

Lying desk like in some faint classroom
The forced appearance of jackals and the haze of over-lectured sleep
Finally the chalkboard makes some sense
The demented professor’s final equation
Chalked up insane
Mania radiating Pandora’s final thoughts
Dripping with effort his hand finally drops
Hope = Darkness
Somewhere clowns are laughing

 

[Raz]

DUDE...that was fucking AWESOME. That was some beautiful imagery there, your wordplay is really great!

You've got this way of writing which is really matter-of-fact but at the same time intense and full of meaning.

Much enjoyed.

--Raz--

 

[Cat Again]

frosty u kick ass. good job and post more plz.

 

[grey kat]

awesome! i love your use of non cliche metaphories and personifications along with great imagery!! keep at it, it rocks!

 

[Frosty da snowman]

DUDE...that was fucking AWESOME. That was some beautiful imagery there, your wordplay is really great!

You've got this way of writing which is really matter-of-fact but at the same time intense and full of meaning.

Much enjoyed.

--Raz--

I tend to like, short terse phrasing and scentences,
I think that style often limits my length though.

awesome! i love your use of non cliche metaphories and personifications along with great imagery!! keep at it, it rocks!

I'm glad that other like some of the things that bounce around in my head to.

 

[neverwas]

i really really liked this one!!!

 

[silverwheel]

nice.

Read any Ron Pagdett? Well, it striked me as very Padgett-esque (forgive me, I'm making all kinds of "esque" comments tonight). I like the rapid dissimilar images that flood past like a series of photographs, and the images are detailed enough so that each retains distinction. A very Padgett-ish quality.