Somewhere/Somehow/Someday

[cherub]

I love you my lil bear,,,,
this is a great peice and i can't believe i have not had time to read it yet,,,, glad i took the time today,


you have always been amazing in my heart and soul,,
your writing just proves it over and over again darlin


love
mama bear !

 

[dogbutt2112]

excellent work

I enjoyed that poem quite a lot. I will be looking for more of your work here.

Jeff

 

[Cosmic Mist]

ditto.

you know that i say the same thing to every piece of yours i read plaz, but everything i say is true. I love your work.

 

[rewiiired]

Somewhere, someone, somehow
Everything's a circle
Everyone's at peace
And we're the odd ones out
Spawned with cancer of the heart
With blackness in our souls

plazma:

I'm moved by the dark, solemn beauty of the entire poem... reveals your deep empathy, your ability to look at things from different (and broader) perspectives, your perspective on the diversity of experience and the pervading sense of sadness...

Very good work.

I haven't read many things in Words in quite awhile, but it's poems like this that make me realize what I'm missing out on...

 

[up all night]

Plaz at his best. No-one could ever doubt his talents.

 

[Rollingrrl]

excellent!

 

[katmeow]

*nods*

 

[neverwas]

Plaz at his best. No-one could ever doubt his talents.

*nods to that...


*sighs*...somewhere,somehow,someday...*sighs*

 

[katmeow]

I still love this piece.


And it also made me think of Mon today... hope that somehow, somewhere, you are at peace now buddy.



Kat

 

[neverwas]

i was just obut to bump this peice

 

[nickthecheese]

I'd not read this before, jesus h christ you can write well you crazy mofo.

 

[onetwothreefour]

*bump* 'cause this is brilliant.

 

[Raz]

I forgot about this....thanks for the bump brad, this is a really powerful piece.