sometimes i miss you

[womanthatrolls]

if i whispered
using my southern breathe

and irish eyes

that i miss you

with every single freckle
that compiles my being

would you turn your head

rub the back of your neck

and tell me
how beautiful
i look
with my hair down

softly
behind my shoulders?


would you slide your arms
through mine

which are accompanying
my small hands that are propped
on my hips?


and would you place your fingers
right below the belt loops of my jeans

quietly
-without suspect-
rubbing the elastic waist
of my black bikini cut gap body
underclothes?



if i whispered


only stopping
stumbling
on the words

that explain
and express

how lonely i feel without knowing you exist


would you come back?


or would you

-like youve been doing for the entire time ive known you-


roll your shoulders
back

tug on your frat boy blue nylon shorts


and whisper
that you arent
good enough
for half of how good i am?



either way

real or fake

now or 1 year ago

warm or cold


i miss you



and even though
your place is filled

im not sure
that i can continue

wanting you
like this

 

[doofqueen]

Wow! I really felt your longing in that one...i know how you feel

 

[SnowFrog]

i love this!!

 

[neverwas]

wow...

...sighs...i can feel for you through this hun. it made me cry to tell you the truth...i have not really anyone i am close to that is near me *apart from a few* and not a day goes by when i dont sit here and think obut them and miss them.

i dont know why i didnt see ur peice before...there is one person in my life rght now that i miss when they rnt around...just lil things they do that remind me of them and how much they mean to me and how specail they r to me. i love knowing that.

i really liked this peice and mass hugs for making me feel like this all warm and fizzy and somewhat longing to see this person again. nice work babe

 

[Dastrix Slogan]

I am left with the image and feeling of you being a beautiful woman, inside and out. It makes me long for someone who I have yet to meet!

*Hugs*

 

[womanthatrolls]

I am left with the image and feeling of you being a beautiful woman, inside and out. It makes me long for someone who I have yet to meet!

*Hugs*

Wow, you and Starfalls really just made my day! It's weird when you write somthing that you're feeling and you never realize that other people can relate but it's always so comforting when they do.

Thanks guys for the smile!!