Something I wrote while listening to Jazz....

[5FACES]

Beneath my feet,
Beneath my skin.
Swallow me up whole.
I move about
from eye to eye,
Finishing up sentences
of sweet wine
that's buzzing in the air.
Busy movement!
Beneath my feet,
Beneath my skin.
Life discussions,
Sultry skin
of the temptress-laughter.
Lightly spinning on the floor,
many legs.
Smells of tasteful liquor
on my breath.
HA HA!!
Beneath my feet,
Beneath my skin.
Lose me,
in the thickness of melodies.
Control me,
bending over backwards.
Closing my eyes,
binded to the scenery.
The succulence,
sweet and sour.
Beneath my feet,
Beneath my skin.
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To see evil in thy eyes,
is not to see thy inner
self.
But to see goodness,
is discover thy soul.

 

[ice-9]

i really like the vibe of this...
jazz 0wnz

 

[morphiestix]

There is not enough jazz influence in the scene. I like your piece and I find jazz inspires me alot too but like you it inspires me poeticly I do not think I can play to it yet.