something happens...

[]ßr3@K[]

Something happens...
I get cold. Things are great
then grow old
Life is happy, and I'm glad
something happens
now I'm sad.
something changes
inside me
something happens
that I can't see

 

[cherub]

This is short and simple but very, just to the point if you read through the lines, i like it.
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" Stay with me just for today and let your soul come rest for a minute. "

 

[Noodle]

Nice. It breaks off a bit early though.
Love this new moniker by the way.

 

[Noodle]

Naw, this piece is just right, and describes to me that jaded sort of feeling that comes with familiar experiance.

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[This message has been edited by Noodle (edited 25 May 2001).]

 

[]ßr3@K[]

Ending early, stopping short... feelings, thoughts of every sort~ emotions felt and abhored... memr'ies tainted but still adored... something's lost in my past... only hope- this pain won't last... from love and pain my heart will fast, until the day this storm has passed.

 

[]ßr3@K[]

Heh... I like that.

 

[unicorn83]

excellent work! i was feeling just that tonight...i've been really happy for the past few weeks then crash out of nowhere im drowning in my tears....though im glad i let it all out..though i wish i had been with someone to talk it through...i'll just have to wait till monday and ill be with the only person i could tak to in this world..who i havent seen in 6 months.
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