sole

[ice-9]

like smoke from the beating
rising above me.
free from form
and feeling-
in your mother's womb a-sleeping
and then i go each way
carry life away
bounce back
and it seems to me
that you disappear
let your mind clear
feeling.
floating round your
seeing,
knowing i'm there but not
that im feeling,
wanting you.
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inspiration came from a song.

 

[Sara Tonin]

I love the way that the words in this piece sort of float. I could almost hear a heart beating in the background. Very comforting

 

[Dagny]

Very well written indeed! Such a flow to the lines, and to the thoughts. Thank you for this sweetie.

 

[alykitty]

you..