So Over

[beanpoophead]

Jaded eyes
faded smiles
and lies so bare
drowning in our
own sweet sorrow
carefree days
danging to it all
early hours
so over

me and you
caught in-between
a chaotic fantasy
of hopes and dreams
covered in naked lies
can’t say goodbye
to a nowhere
noplace town
so over

dark days
ahead and behind
cut throat truths
and by product lies
but by and by
we go on
to carry
our own broken crosses
so over

broken hearts
two million miles
apart
except its two blocks
and a million
clcoks
holuding us down
keeping us here
so over

memories of
two months ago
when we were
okay
and we ran with
lines beside us
capturing each
moment, smile
so over

pain sheds
like tears fallen
off our
dirty faces
shameless
disorientation, given
from me to you
and you to them
so over

and it is
so over
all the days
gone
but were left here
and i can’t smile
or hold you here
cos im afraid
it can’t be over

 

[RareForm]

good poem...nice work.

 

[E-girl]

very nice.

me and you
caught in-between
a chaotic fantasy
of hopes and dreams
covered in naked lies
can’t say goodbye
to a nowhere
noplace town
so over

this describes me all too well. to a T.
and this:

broken hearts
two million miles
apart
except its two blocks
and a million
clcoks
holuding us down
keeping us here
so over

memories of
two months ago
when we were
okay
and we ran with
lines beside us
capturing each
moment, smile
so over

pretty much summarizes my last relationship; and how i hope this one doesnt end up.