so many lines!!!

[wesmdow]

---lines___

lines----
lines---
lines--

kissing each corner\
caressing every seam/

..but

...twisted\bent/battered\torked
to render the bubbling brook of
nature
an icey geometric reality.

lines on the plate.

lines on my face.

drawn on the street.

dug in the sand.

lines.

__ ____________________...

the check out at walmart:
..."line starts back there, buddy"

im not done with this quite yet.. id like to somehow incorporate some metaphorical 'drawing' of the metaphorical lines, but im not sure where to put it.

opinions?

 

[(Wordy)]

This reads like the sketch of an idea at this stage - a jotting in a notebook. It's not "full-blown" yet, although these parts are definitely on the way:

kissing each corner\
caressing every seam/

...twisted\bent/battered\torked
to render the bubbling brook of
nature
an icey geometric reality.

I say keep scribbling on this theme; keep brainstorming. The concept has potential.

Also, check out Charles Bernstein's poem Of Time and the Line.