so fragile

[beanpoophead]

So fragile
pale skin
blue eyes
coarse blonde
straight, locks hang
looking into the mirror
glass breaks beneath
its like the world shakes
when she sees her face
pacing for hours
motions sparkling
in her fair gaze
that beckons the hand
to bid her farewell
and wave her beyond
the Sunday pain
loneliness makes gaps
beneath her breast
the heart is what beats
and makes her go on
pursed, pressed pretty
chapped lips
broken smile
So fragile

 

[FixXxer]

very well done,
this is one of my favorites that you've done
i dont know how you did it, but it all comes together perfectly.
(ps: i cant quote any certain part, because if i did, id have to quoite the whole thing) Keep on Keepin On

 

[katmeow]

loneliness makes gaps
beneath her breast
the heart is what beats
and makes her go on

Another really good piece of work.

You write sadness so well

 

[thursday]

So fragile
pale skin
blue eyes
coarse blonde
straight, locks hang
looking into the mirror
glass breaks beneath
its like the world shakes
when she sees her face

beautiful.