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So B It

beanpoophead

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break

desire to make piece
put back together
fall to the floor again
lies there in its selfishness
so bare

broke

penniless wonderment
through eyes that are not
wide enough to be free
kept good in pure goodness
so rare

broken

can't help it/mesmerized
picked up and placed
back together, saw my face
poured concrete, split ceiling
so awake

and it moves too
make me whole again
without that place
 
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Belong
... i can tell you belong to this poem.. a great peice of work.. AGAIN! its amazing how in the english language, one word, in differant tenses, can mean somethign completely differant in each form.. that is why.. the nglish language is fucked.. too much slang, thats all we are now, or so it seems to me, is slang, its sooo hard to be specific, because people will associate certain definitions with words that you use, meanwhile you mean one of the other definitions. too hard to communicate with some people.
 
...and so be it.

i like the title of this peice. but it makes me think to say 'dont settle for anything less than you deserve"

you're and awesome girl :)
 
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