.:Smoke Screen:.

[CHiLD-0F-THE-BEAT]

.:Smoke Screen:.

She rocks around her
Thinned and coloured
Metal universe

Traipsing lonely
Watching thin
Against stiff panes of glass

She watches
Concrete move with tremors
Music sings her name

She's staring hollow
Sitting tight
She moulds things to the pain.

 

[RareForm]

i missed you damnit!

i could read your poetry all day.

'she molds things to the pain' such a great line.

 

[raverchik]

I enjoyed this alot COTB, I love pieces like this

 

[Dastrix Slogan]

Woohoo! The return of COTB!!!

We missed you here bigbig. I loved this!

 

[asmodeus256]

Delightfully tragic poem sweetie. LOVEYOU

 

[mariacallas]

I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

[cherub]

I some how just feel this one,, I think it is one of your best!