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Slut; An Exercise In Pity. Part One.

Raz

Raz

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In an igloo made of asbestos and chicken-wire.
call me that name and I'll hit you again,
you're a slut,
you're a bitch,
you're a whore;
Sometimes any attention is better than none.

Drag yourself there again, drag it out;
You know you want to.
Subject yourself to all that shit you hate because you know you wish you were part of it.
You wish you were one of those vapid cunts with the tight body and the $400 sunglasses and the boyfriend who looks like a porn star and fucks like a Mack truck.
And the friends.

Go solo, that's your favourite part isn't it?
Then you get to show the world how much you're alone;
In fact why don't you wear the clothes that'll make you stand out like an 11 year old hooker? Then you'll really have their eyes on you.

Hate this as much as you like, you need it as much as you hate it as much as you like it.
You know you do.

So you run to your room and you hide in your room,
thinking how you could settle the score;

End Part One.
 
This is the first piece of yours that I have read Raz and I truly loved it. The anger within it is controlled and allows the piece to flow better because of it, rather than flinging off onto a tangent. Well done, and sorry I missed the meetup the other week :(
 
You know everything you described about the person you depicted (or the "type" of person) is superficial.

*hugs*

I know deep in your heart you dont want to be that superficial queen... you are more than that, you have a soul.

Or maybe i just read it too much and made up what i want to make up...

You are what you are, and that, is enough.

:)
 
^ With driving unstoppable force! [but of course]

The anger in this piece is really unsettling [but it's that anger that also makes it a great piece of writing]
 
angry = good.

but, only if you can write. and you raz, are damn good at it. very nice piece, the disjointed flow (ooh oxymoron - it makes sense in my head :p) is fantastic, and i like your emotiveness :)

best parts:

Originally posted by Raz
You wish you were one of those vapid cunts with the tight body and the $400 sunglasses and the boyfriend who looks like a porn star and fucks like a Mack truck.
And the friends.

...

Hate this as much as you like, you need it as much as you hate it as much as you like it.
You know you do.


:D
 
raz i have to say that although you post even less prose than i do you are without a doubt my fav BL writer.
 
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