Slow Motion

[Mary Poppins]

Hmm....I've been writing a fair bit lately. Seems to all be emo stuff I guess. Hopefully the time will come soon where I can move on from that

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My soft steps pause
Only standing somewhere
Recollecting nothing special
Just your steady footfall beside mine
It won’t be heard again
And I don’t think I’ll ever stop
Hearing what is now gone
Or stop seeing what was
Once close enough to touch
My imagination too vivid to quell
The desires these false images produce
Shaking my head to lose them
Makes them stick stronger
And they spread, permeating
Overtaking my whole mind
You and me walking, talking
Laughing, god knows what else
Replays of these mundane activities
Are but a celluloid dream
That not just won’t, but can’t come true
Anymore, ever again

 

[drug_wench]

nice..........it speaks volumes
i like writing 2, ive got heapsa poems and songs ive written and collected over the yrs during various moods and states of mind
not as gd as urs

 

[plazma]

It can't be emo, cause I like it.

Seriously this is another damnfine poem, and another proof in my argument that you DO have literary talent.

Excellent work.

-plaz out-

 

[Dastrix Slogan]

Where I come from there is no emo, so you just go ahead and impress me some more with your talent!

 

[crshnbrn200]

right there with you. Good stuff.