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Slipping my skin

supersonic

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Break down like beats of my heart as I see the faces passing by.
Venom seems to seep out into my world as I breath in the vanishing gasps of oxygen.
But in time I see what time brings to me and its forgiving and cleansing.
It loves to let you go to let go of what you can't close your eyes to see.
Sipping the nectar once again and hoping my cup stays full.
I wish it was like this forever I say everytime and everytime forever forgets its job.
You see trenches build themselves from the rotten decay of emotional fallout.
And sometimes we get buried alive, watching the shovel pour death upon us.
And we are safe in this cave of the slings and arrows of discourse.
And of course, we always dig ourselves out claiming liberation to a million faschists.
And we are the faschist, we are pompous, the ludicrous, the trite.
And we see it in each other and we pretend thats its all just a small dream.
In which our eyes arise for a moment and in a blink are covered.
And then we aren't covered at all, only by the earth we buried ourselves in, and then we will slip our skin.
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If anything I do drugs to appreciate reality.
 
Supersonic..that was extremely intelligent and passionate. And I must confess with the highest compliment I ever give to anyone's writings...This piece is very Cohenesque.
WOW!!! I can so easily see this poem printed between waxy sheets of a hardbound book, somewhere in some fancy book-store. I hope you keep good record of all your writings...
And..
Keep writing. Thank you for your words..
Loads of luvs,
-Amina
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"Like a bird on a wire, Like a drunk in a midnight choir, I have tried in my way to be free" - Leonard Cohen
 
I like this one bumpity bump
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fuck you if you dont believe in plur!
 
You are truly a talented writer. You articulate every thought and emotion with the deepest of passion and truth. I think you are my favorite bluelighter so far!! I've only been checking out this site for the past couple of weeks and I seem to stop and read everything I find of yours. I enjoy your work very much Supersonic. Thanks for sharing your work...I know it comes straight from you soul...at least that's the impression I get!
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believe in yourself to be true and let your instincts guide you
 
Thanks for all the responses, I'm glad to know make sense to you. I actually wrote that when I was listening to moby. I notice sometimes what I'm listening to affects what I write.
thanks.
 
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