Sliding Glass Door

[theverylonelyfirefly]

I see our reflection, shimmering and dim.
Topless and entwined, pale skin, soft light.
For that moment I am just right.
In my mind's eye only can I see
The force, the pull, between you and me.

That night, oh my, was it just a dream?
Never to be found in my reality?
But dreams are the stuff life is made of.
And I know in my heart of hearts
Somewhere, somehow, those twin souls dance,
Unfettered and free.

In another reality.

 

[froggygirl]

I like this.. very beautiful. I look forward to seeing more of your work.. I like the ending line, it pulls it all together. Very nice.

 

[EverythingsEventual]

I can identify with the emotions in this piece of work, I feel the same a lot lately

Very pretty and very well written

 

[DarkPoet]

That's realy quite beautiful and I can't believe I've only just seen it. I love the way it twists, there's spirals in it for sure.
Glad to see that you're putting your work up, take cares, DP.x

 

[cherub]

First:


Welcome to Words!

I love this,,, smooth and dreamy feel to it..... very Lovely!

 

[theverylonelyfirefly]

This is my first effort, so i very much appreciate the feedback. We'll see if anything else decides to come. Thanks again.

 

[RareForm]

First:


Welcome to Words!

Oh yes.

I thought this was great as well..

 

[CrYsTaLe]

great piece very mystical....welcome!

 

[skjalff]

I really liked this one, especially this part:

<<
And I know in my heart of hearts
Somewhere, somehow, those twin souls dance,
Unfettered and free.
>>

downright beautiful. Great job


skjalff

 

[katmeow]

/\/\/\

I loved those lines too.

Lovely imagery

 

[drEaMtiMe*@#]

Originally posted by theverylonelyfirefly
But dreams are the stuff life is made of.
And I know in my heart of hearts
Somewhere, somehow, those twin souls dance,
Unfettered and free.

In another reality.

I love what your saying in this part. Really good writing