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CHiLD-0F-THE-BEAT

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She wraps a cord
Of blood red silt
Around her broken bones.

They click and sigh
Click and sigh
Overcoming moans.

She pulls them up
Towards her chest
And rocks herself to sleep.

Click and sigh
Click and sigh
Tumble to her feet.
 
NO! This is not going to drop off the first page without mention! ;)

This is so clever! Brilliant work COTB!!!!!!
 
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Great piece from a great writer.
This would have to be the piece that struck me the most out of those I have read of yours - especially upon the first few times upon reading it. Within the context of the day the piece has even more value, it's just so piercing. I felt so many things from it.
Thank-you for sharing sweetheart.
 
I liked this one, you've definitely got a unique style to your writing.

You manage to convey so much meaning with few words.

Nice work :)
 
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