Sinking

[DJmikaMC]

Body Aching
Keep Running
Spirit Breaking
Keep Trying
Not Slipping
Already Fallen
Hands Gripping
Fists of Air
Emptiness Above the Water
Drowning

Pushed? No
Chose To Go
Surrounded by Doubt
Cant Let it Show
Temptation To Quit
Must Say No

Ladder Gone
Rescue Crew Deployed
Blur Begins To Fill This Void

And So I Sink to the Ocean Floor
Hopes and Dreams that were Before
Cease Existance Evermore
And Leave Me Here Upon the Shore
With Nothing Less and Nothing More.
~Me 10/08/03

 

[cherub]

lovely written,,, alittle hard to caught the meaning,,,, but i still enjoyed reading it regardless

 

[neverwas]

i really liked thisone to... it reads well and is clear in description and words...

nicely done