Simply titled Love... a poem written for me...

[AmorRoark]

This is a poem someone wrote to me... what do you guys think?

The power, the pleasure, the shock, the pain
Love makes us ingenius, love makes us insane
Mind numbing, heart drumming, soul strumming
Earth shaking, mind breaking, painstaking
Butterflies, Vanilla Skies, stupid lies, second tries
A bridge, a shelter, thunder, lightening
Love is beautiful, love is frightening
Love will swallow you whole
spit you out, sit you out and shit you out.

Love is fire and rain and sun and earth
Love is what gives life its worth
Love is devine, an earthquake of the soul
Love can leave you empty, but love will make you whole
Love is a joy, love is perfect, love is life.

 

[neverwas]

Love will swallow you whole
spit you out, sit you out and shit you out.

this is well worded...couldnt of said it better myself

it was a sweet thing to read.

 

[Nietzche]

blegh! Please spare me another sappy poem about love!!!

This wasn't that terrible.

Can I take a stab at who wrote it? Wait, that didn't quite sound right . . . I mean can I guess at who wrote it?

 

[AmorRoark]

Blegh yourself. I seem to remember you writing a love poem or two yourself.

 

[Dagny]

Well I fuckin' loved it.

 

[Nietzche]