silhouettes from the past

[haikod]

step up for a ride,
faces pace through time
looking at the great divide.
this slide's got my mind in a race
surged with thoughts becoming undone.
i'll always notice your trace
even when the sun is gone.
for now, the sky has turned.

will you see the difference?
the clouds may leave or stay
but silhouettes from the past
will remain.

the feel is right here
sit down if you want today,
look around the ground they sing and play
do you hear what they say?

can you see the difference
when the clouds come to stay,
silhouettes from the past
forever stay the same.

i'll tell you all i've seen
through this magnified screen.
voices shouting for an end
to sullen schools giving trends,
living in a bottle of masses unable to bend.

can you see the difference
even when the clouds change
silhouettes from the past
never change their range.

? i've been sober for the past three days so these lyrics look strange to me...

 

[(Wordy)]

Hey, I really like the first verse and first chorus. I can hear these working well when put to music.

 

[haikod]

thanks, its a song im trying to write about musicians of different generations that get overlooked and are for the most part unheard by many people who listen to alot of shit....imo...today

i need to work on it so that maybe that idea is more prevalent...but i like the personal feeling the lyrics pull from me.