Significance Ache

[Prolapstriumph]

The doctrine of your greed's device
your doctorate deception
Immersed in falsest quasi-christ
compassion bleached aggression.

Sweet cathartic savior
how he basks in your sorrows
Now drenched in your behavior
for forgiven tomorrows.

Absurd, the lengths, the casual stride
you'd gone so far, to make so taut
These chains of control, tested and tried
my transgression so casually sought.

 

[RareForm]

you're a fast becoming a favorite of mine...

Keep posting...

I URGE you

 

[Prolapstriumph]

Wow thanks so much, i had no idea the poetry i wrote would be worth anything to anyone else. It was always a casual endeavor which i loved to express with occasionally, rather than a passionate hobby, which it has been developing into since posting in the words forum, and being open with it towards my family and peers.

And thanks for the motivation and inspiration of the very talented people who post here, i wish my days had more time to offer browsing forums and such.

 

[cherub]

This is great stuff, you write as several other of my favorite writters around here. Great write and a pleasure to read. Thanks !