Sick Suspended

[spinkle]

Sick Suspended
It makes me sick to think how much I like the pain now
Years of waiting draining lust disgust and how you came now
Deriving faith and driving clean into the brain now
Cutting cords and costs seduced to seem the same now
Spun and dissolved in sound
Sick suspended and sinking down
Drilled and drugged to breathe despite uncertain pressure
Gagged and choked destroyed consumed within the pleasure
Ached and bound inert and certain to go down now
Pleased to guarantee your voice won't be around now
I'll shake till I see you again
Your touch is a bullet to the back of the brain stem
Spun and dissolved in sound
Sick suspended and sinking down
Your touch is a bullet to the back of the brain stem
Spun and dissolved in sound
Sick suspended and sinking down
Your touch is a bullet to the back of the brain stem.

 

[fizzygirl]

i like the alliteration in the

Spun and dissolved in sound
Sick suspended and sinking down
Its very catchy sounding, made me want to read it out loud.

 

[lilygirl]

i really liked this this just adds to your assortment of unique perspectives. love poems always seem so cliched... this one was most definitely in it's own category.
~lil