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short sight, spinning in the heather

spinkle

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short sight, spinning in the heather

you have to grasp events when shifted out of order
possibility exposed surprises paranoia
blink off blown lights fuses pop string ending
cue the question in now are we done depending
ditch the active foreign fingers etch the fold
the hardened stare screams now tell me why wasn't i told

we're starred and hazed backlit dense with summer
yes one more kiss yes you can pull me under
the jasmine humid honeysuckle sanguine sex
but wicked kittens aren't easily impressed

shine in short sight, spinning in the heather
hiss the curse you swore that you would never

against the wall push definitions of romantic
the pearl that grew around suspicion you implanted
seethe and faintly mouth the harsh words robbed of breath
but all you want will never come at your request

the voice raised in defense decays this further
yes one more kiss yes you can pull me under
blink off blown light fuses pop string ending
cue the curtains down now are we done pretending

shine in short sight, spinning in the heather
(all you want will never come as you request)


spinkle 2004
 
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i flew through that one, has to be the best rhyming poem i've ever read. you never disappoint my friend.

thanks for sharing :)
 
thanks rareform =) it's a song. i've got a recording but it's a rough draft with incomplete lyrics and an improper arrangement. a more correct version should be done soon. i edited slightly, let me know what you think of the differences if you would. =)
 
is that the one you were so happy about the other night? it's gorgeous! <3<3
 
spinkle said:
thanks rareform =) it's a song. i've got a recording but it's a rough draft with incomplete lyrics and an improper arrangement. a more correct version should be done soon. i edited slightly, let me know what you think of the differences if you would. =)
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that's going to be one hell of a song! what kind of music? I can imagine some sort of metal sound...

i like it alot, it still has the same effect, where you from? we need some new band members! =D%)
 
i'm from the wasteland of suburbs surrounding philly, iirc that's not too close to you :\ i may be moving to omaha,ne tho... ;)

what kind of music? angsty white boy rock =)

fizzy honey: you're gorgeous too ;)
 
we're starred and hazed backlit dense with summer
yes one more kiss yes you can pull me under
the jasmine humid honeysuckle sanguine sex
but wicked kittens aren't easily impressed
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so awesome!

you're my favorite songwriter spink!

<3
 
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