Shoes

[mashead testing]

She was hurt,
but you couldnt even feel her
she looked deep,
but you didnt try to believe her
She was lost,
in a sea of insecurities
she cried with me,
but you still never wondered
The lonely soul of togetherness
the second rate loss of love
nothing lasts forever and a day
but everything mattered so much
I try to console you
not going to let them win
I try and ask myself
how did you ever get in between
Between what?
between the stars and the sky,
or between,
the thoughts in my mind
Between the sparkle in my eyes,
he lost you and you are lost
but I find with me its new
although a struggle to stay
You cant hide when you are with me
I dare you to lie and say believe me
wipe those tears away
and start thinking
Its funny how people attract
the way things fall together
and then fall apart again
you were always my friend.
[ 13 May 2002: Message edited by: masheadatronic ]

 

[phoenixowen]

really mooving, love this work.

 

[frostyangel]

Wow, Mash..
this was excellent, you kept me hanging on every word..
Two thumbs up and a high 5

 

[ImNotTelling]

Hey sweetie, that was great..
good job, my friend
~smile~

 

[nephil]

Very nice, I really liked this

 

[harraser]

I realllllly liked that last stanza!! farking tops mayte!!!, as my freind Vicki would say great work Mash

 

[Young Alien Type]

I don't want to sound mechanical, But a great piece, and one I can identfy with.

 

[Angelight]

excellent!