"Shine"

[wastedwalrus]

“Shine”

Deep inside us, a resting god,
With efforts powerful but flawed,
May show himself at anytime
And with him stir the world to shine.

For though bound in the binds of mortality,
Everything that is will always be.
And all that’s true of Love and Grace
Is sheltered here in Time and Space.​

 

[Raz]

ahh, I really liked that!

That was really genuine and sweet, it made me smile to read it. Thank you!

 

[wesmdow]

its beautiful jason, but i dont agree!

it makes me think, tho.

 

[wastedwalrus]

Hehe, agree to disagree?

Thanks both of you.

 

[wesmdow]

theres been a few times youve expresed to me some feelings with the POLAR OPPOSITE idea behind that poem is all...

maybe youre making progress. gj.

 

[wastedwalrus]

Haha no, no progress. Just wishful thinking .

 

[not_broken_420]

I like it. I like that the rhyming doesn't seem forced, but it flows.

 

[colicolo]

nice