She Needs

[youthoughtyouknew]

HES LEADING THEM PLACES THEY NEVER THOUGHT TOGO,
relocateing THEM HE SEEMS TO NEVER UNDERSTAND,
SHES NEVER HAD HER OWN AND ALWAYS BEEN ALONE,
SHES CARED FOR THEM ALL HER LIFE AND NEVER HAD HER OWN,
HE SAYS ITS OK AND EVERYTHING WILL WORK,
BUT STILL SHE FEELS SHE NEED MORE,

WHY CANT HE LET HER BE THE GIRL SHE NEEDS TO BE,
suicids NOT THE WAY, PAST attemps FAILED ANYWAY,
BUT SHE CANT KICK THE THOUGHT THAT ITS JUST WHAT SHE NEEDS,
WHY CANT SHE BE THE GIRL SHE NEEDS TO BE,

THEY LOCKED AND THE REST IS HISTORY,
FEELINGS GIVEN MUTUALLY UNEXPLAINABLE AND BLIND TO SEE,
HE GAVE HER THINGS THAT WERE NEVER KNOWN BY ANYONE BUT THEM,
SHE GAVE HIM HOPE AND LOVE FOR LIFE BUT IT WOULD NEVER LAST,
YOU SEE NOW SHES GONE AND BOTH MEN CRY AND WEEP FOR LOVE THAT shouldnt HAVE DIED,

WHY CANT HE LET HER BE THE GIRL SHE NEEDS TO BE,
SUICIDS NOT THE WAY, PAST ATTEMPS FAILED ANYWAY,
BUT SHE CANT KICK THE THOUGHT THAT ITS JUST WHAT SHE NEEDS,
WHY CANT SHE BE THE GIRL SHE NEEDS TO BE,

 

[cherub]

a very moving piece,, good work !

 

[colicolo]

Dude, that is an awesome piece and at the same time it really scares me.
Colin

 

[RareForm]

suicide is not the way, this depressed me as well - you wrote this well..

~Drew