Shards

[Mokenwee]

This is just some shitty poem I came up with just now. Tathra wanted me to post it here so hello! I have never written a poem before excluding what was learned in school so my insperation is still some what of a mystery.
*********SHARDS*********
Life is pain on the day
depression rains.
Flowers will fade
when your beauty's away.
Seek shelter from your thoughts
for it only breaks the heart.
Sadness you know all to well
is taking you stright to hell.
Why is this happining to me?
Someone please set me free.
Feelings are felt most alone
for people to cast like a stone.
I only wish to skip so free,
like a child full of glee.
Can you toss me to the sea
so I can finaly be at ease?
This pain is taken so much,
will it ever be enough.
Launched into the summer breeze,
my rock falls ever so deep.
Darkness has come to say hello
once again I'm back in hell.
Feeling the pain over again,
How can I ever escape the rain?
-Mokenwee

 

[plazma]

I really identify with this, and as a poem its extremely carefully written, I really dig it!
-plaz out-