Sexually Frustrated....

[alykitty]

Ravage me, like I crave to be ravaged.
Ravage you, like I crave to do.
Breathing you in, every breath
Taking you in, all of you.
Taste of your lips
Smell of your skin
Sounds of sheer pleasure
All wrapped up in, sin
Embraced by this, erotica.
Sweatin’ like a cold glass on a hot day
Inhibitions, non-existent
Real, as children at play
Drenched by passion,
Ate up with lust.
Swoonin’ moanin’ groanin’,
Cold chills from the touch.
Let’s just play here
Like lovers so often do
I just wanna stay here
Dancing in this drug that is, you

 

[Tijo]

Down Boy!
In other words...I love it.
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This message will self-destruct 5..4..3..2...

 

[Noodle]

*packing a chubber*

 

[E-girl]

ooooh, aly, start runnin' now,
The boys are gonna attack ya!
lol
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[Furnace]

Allow me to retort:
*DOOSH!*
^
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That's the sound of my cock hitting me in the face. jk

There's something to be said about a piece of writing that can evoke sensual feelings without descending into open pornography.
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Still post-rockin' in a free world

 

[Sara Tonin]

Ooooooh how sexxxsay! I likey!!

 

[ice-9]

well written and emotionally charged. beautifully covered with vivid imagery...i like it a lot!
sounds like it would make great lyrics to a song, the way the rythm is set up.

 

[harraser]

I envy whoever you wrote that about...

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"if there were no rewards to reap,
no loving embrace to see me through
this tedious path Ive chosen here
I certainly would have walked away by now.
And I still may."-MJK TOOL

 

[Crow]

 

[Sweetpea]

Cigarette?

 

[PixieGirl]

Very good aly! Just be sure to bring your blueberry body lotion!

 

[cloud 9]

hell yeah! damn i know who to think of when i read something like this.
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Do i really need one of these?

 

[L O V E L I F E]

I wouldn't have canceled last night had I known you were feeling this way.
{{{Aly}}}

 

[yakksoho]

Damn I dig this!!
Totally fantastic. The title says it all. Frustration and emotion and swords clashing in ever verse. Always digging it.
Good show.

 

[Mellabopper]

::hugs::

 

[alykitty]

Thanks, you guys

 

[Haza]

ooo la la

 

[Dagny]

LL: You shouldn't have cancelled last night anyway.. ya flaka.

Aly.... gurrrrrlllllllllllll. Yer damn right. And I think this is one of the best things you have ever written. It's just so... raw. Honest. Abrupt. Sexy. It suits you perfectly!

 

[unicorn83]

i'm defenitly adding this to my file of favourite poems!!
that was goooooood, beautifully written in its own way

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'id rather live in an illusion than face harsh reality' me
GouRanGA
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